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30 April 2007 @ 01:38 am
Boy or Man?  
Title: Boy or Man?
Rating: PG
Challenge: HBP
Author's Note: This is my little out take of when Snape goes to Voldemort and tells him about the prophecy. Any guesses to why our dearest former Potions professor is feeling this way? Hummmmmmmmmm?

He stares at the kneeling boy before him. Hair just below the ears, ebony and brackish in disposition. Pale, shallow skin, nose that hooks slightly pointing to his thin, almost cruel, mouth. The perfect appearance of a Slytherin; the perfect disciple to his cause.

“So, you bring me information. Something that will be of use to me.”

Both said as questions but left as statements. They are not allowed to displease him.

“Yes, my lord.”

The mixture of hate, sorrow, and listlessness in his eyes would have bothered Tom more if the words of the boy hadn’t been so intriguing.
Mandy: Sexy Snapemandya06 on April 30th, 2007 11:39 am (UTC)
Oh wow! I really liked this! I'm actually sad that it's only a drabble, because it could have only gotten better from here. ^_^

I love Voldemort's critique of Snape. Very accurate, and it's awesome to see Snape getting some respect for his looks that he's criticized for everywhere else. (I'm rather fond of him, can you tell?) *lol*

The end was very interesting, and it makes me want more. Wonderful job!
Allons-y!moltobene1925 on April 30th, 2007 11:31 pm (UTC)
thanks! I was aiming to show off Snape as I saw him back then, and this flashed in my head.

*and I love your Trent/Snape icon*